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ozwatto |
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Joined: January 2007 Posts: 672 Location: New South Wales, Australia | Feel free to add your ideas or thoughts. These words came to me in a 30 second moment of inspiration and then....nothing....the story of my songwriting efforts through the years. I once was a beggar I murdered for love She lived alone at 22 Her parents lived above And when she came for breakfast she was like a piece of string So elegant and reckless And all those other things | ||
Omaha |
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Joined: November 2005 Posts: 1126 Location: Omaha, NE | "so I shot her" | ||
ozwatto |
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Joined: January 2007 Posts: 672 Location: New South Wales, Australia | Short, sweet, and to the point...I like it :D ...but I think I need something in the middle to get to the blood and guts part | ||
CrimsonLake |
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Joined: August 2006 Posts: 3145 Location: Marlton, NJ | For one brief, shining moment She said I was the one 'Til the day that I walked in And found that she was gone I stood there in despair My love had up and left Nothing but a letter Addressed to "My Love, Jeff" This rocked me to the core Like a hammer to the head My blood began to boil Cause my freakin' name is Ed! Take it away.... | ||
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Joined: December 2003 Posts: 13984 Location: Upper Left USA | I once was a beggar I murdered for love She lived alone at 22 Her parents lived above And when she came for breakfast she was like a piece of string So elegant and reckless And all those other things Chorus I didn't see it coming like a six o-clock train. How do I keep from running but here I remain In over my head by Sunday like a shot with no pain. No turning around, no looking behind. No serious plan or a way to rewind. Just don't hit fast-forward and ruin the day It's all in the shuffle and not in the play. ...so I shot her... | ||
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Joined: February 2004 Posts: 2487 | Is this a song or are the "local authorities" going to be knocking on your door soon? I would have said "The Police" but that would have opened these guy's up to way to many easy one liners. | ||
AussieJames |
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Joined: June 2007 Posts: 3084 Location: Brisbane Australia | All women have strings attached!!! He should have known better AJ :D | ||
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Joined: May 2003 Posts: 4389 Location: Capital District, NY, USA Minor Outlying Islands | The lyrics could be set to the verse in louie louie. | ||
an4340 |
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Joined: May 2003 Posts: 4389 Location: Capital District, NY, USA Minor Outlying Islands | I once was a beggar I murdered for love She lived alone Her parents above She came for breakfast Pulling those strings So elegant and reckless And all those other things She asked my why I had no job She told me her Daddy Said I was a clod I told her that Gimme no mo' crap Or yo' gonna make me Shut yo' trap Go ahead ya, Big man Ya got no guts My Daddy'll come down and kick you, butt. Pulled out the gun Shot her three times Cops said why You gonna pay for your crimes So I'm in jail a long time, now But I'm so glad, I shot that bad bitch down | ||
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Joined: December 2006 Posts: 6992 Location: Jet City | Originally posted by AussieJames: Yes.... monthlyAll women have strings attached!!! | ||
Omaha |
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Joined: November 2005 Posts: 1126 Location: Omaha, NE | Got a real tear jerker there... | ||
John B |
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Joined: January 2004 Posts: 1225 Location: Lake Hiawatha, New Jersey | Originally posted by Damon67: :DOriginally posted by AussieJames: Yes.... monthly All women have strings attached!!! | ||
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Joined: March 2005 Posts: 2791 Location: Atlanta, GA. | Are y'all talkin' about the misplaced dental floss? | ||
Beal |
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Joined: January 2002 Posts: 14127 Location: 6 String Ranch | xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx | ||
Mark in Boise |
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Joined: March 2005 Posts: 12750 Location: Boise, Idaho | If only. | ||
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Joined: March 2007 Posts: 840 Location: CA | A man had giv'n all other bliss And all his worldly worth for this To lose his heart in just one kiss Upon her perfect lips ... and then he shot her. | ||
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Joined: September 2008 Posts: 757 Location: Melbourne Australia | You have probably seen this before Watto but consider it a refresher..... A Blues Way Of Life Sometimes people want to join The Blues Excuse. Naturally, we test them to make sure they really understand what the blues are all about. Do you understand the blues yourself? Are you living a proper blues lifestyle? Try our quick test: How To Write A Blues Song Blues are about basic stuff like "woke up this morning" or "I got a good woman." But the blues also needs trouble. So if you've got a good woman then you'd better stick something bad in next (eg: "I got a good woman with the meanest dog in town"). Then keep repeating that line until you think of something that rhymes. For example: I got a good woman with the meanest dog in town. Yeah, I got a good woman with the meanest dog in town. He got teeth like an alligator and he weighs 500 pounds Blues Stereotypes The blues are not about limitless choice. In fact, the blues are butt-deep in stereotypes. For example: Transportation: Blues cars are Chevies and Cadillacs. (Not BMWs. Or Volvos. Ever.) Other acceptable blues transportation is a Greyhound bus or a southbound train. Walkin' shoes also play a major part in the blues lifestyle. Age is also rigidly controlled. Only adults can sing the blues. Blues adulthood means being old enough to get the electric chair if you shoot a man in Memphis. Acceptable blues colors are black and blue. Colors that don't belong in the blues are violet, beige and mauve. Blues attire: No one will believe it's the blues if you wear a suit. Unless you happen to be an old black man. Blues Locations You can have the blues in New York City, but not in Port Douglas. Chicago, St. Louis and Kansas City still get good blues mileage. But hard times in Noosa or Margaret River are just a little depression. In the blues, it's always New Orleans that everybody goes "all the way to." But the French Quarter is a blues no-no. The only hard times there are when the ATM is down. You can't have the blues in an office or a shopping mall (the lighting is wrong). But good places for the blues include the highway, the jailhouse or an empty bed. Blues Rights Do you have the right to sing the blues? Yes if: You're blind You shot a man in Memphis You can't be satisfied But the answer is no if: You have a trust fund You were once blind, but now can see You're deaf You're dead Blues Food and Drink It's been well established that if you ask for water and your baby gives you gasoline, it's the blues. Other blues beverages are: Cheap wine Any kind of whiskey Muddy water Blues beverages are not:: UDL premixers Bailey's or Midori Cafe latte Although Rubber Biscuits and the Wish Sandwich are famous blues snacks, better stick to common blues grub: Greasy food Fatback and beans Kraft cheddar Blues food is never a: Club sandwich Sushi Crème brule Quiche Blues Life and Death If it occurs in a cheap motel or a shotgun shack, it's a blues death. Stabbed in the back by a jealous lover is a blues way to die. So is the electric chair, substance abuse, or being denied treatment in an emergency room. But it's not a blues death if you die during a liposuction treatment. Short of actual death, "fixin' to die" is well regarded in the blues. Blues Names Some good blues names for women: Sadie Big Mama Bessie Some good blues names for men: Joe, Big Joe, Little Joe Willie, Little Willie Lightnin' Persons with names like Jason, Kylie, Tabitha, Alexis or Gwenyth will not be permitted to sing the blues no matter now many men they shoot in Memphis. How To Create A Blues Name Mix and match from the following. Nick name: physical infirmity (blind, cripple, asthmatic) First name: add a fruit (Lemon, lime, melon etc) Last name: a US president (Jefferson, Johnson, Lincoln, Roosevelt). Eg: Blind Melon Jefferson and of course you can find a way of throwing in what appears to be a common line..... and then he shot her :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: | ||
ozwatto |
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Joined: January 2007 Posts: 672 Location: New South Wales, Australia | Plenty to think about there Chris. Thanks for that in-depth look at the blues. It seems, from most responses, that I'm going to have to introduce some sort of firearm into the song. Shotgun?...handgun?....machine-gun?....bazooka?...speargun maybe?... | ||
flackster |
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Joined: September 2008 Posts: 757 Location: Melbourne Australia | Set yourself a challenge Watto and go for the lot - just like the great aussie song "I've been everywhere" !!! Don't wimp out on us.... Cheers Deaf Mango Ford | ||
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